Week 11

Mar. 23rd, 2012 01:01 pm
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McKay’s poem title “Icarus” is infested with bird imagery for different reasons. Icarus’ ambition to fly and his idolization of flight is best exemplified by birds. A playful description of movement is related to a grounded aspect of life… “Icarus notices how the Red-tails and Broadwings separate their primaries to spill a little air, giving up just enough lift to break their drag up into smaller trailing vortices. What does this remind him of? He thinks of the kind of gentle teasing that can dissipate a dark mood so it slips off as a bunch of skirmishes and quirks,” showing that being in flight makes more sense to him than being earthbound. Birds are representative of freedom and in the line “he’s out of the story and into the song” reminds us of the carefree nature of a birds song when he is free and is what Icarus longs for.
Also, in the mythology Icarus is told by his father how to manage his wings when he is instructed to not fly to close to the sun. In the poem, Icarus idolizes the movement and skill of different types of birds. Birds possess the instinct to use their wings wisely and not fly too close to the sun which Icarus has yet to learn, or will not evolve to possess the wings in the same way as the birds do. His father gave him a gift and birds are the proper execution of how to use that gift.


Part 2:

A dystopia is a term to describe a society wherein there is lack of autonomy in its citizens and there is a high degree of control, shown through forced conformity or allegiance to a leader or political structure. A dystopian work of literature is one that creates the image of an oppressed society, in a way it is a form of satire that exaggerates a pre-existing social more in order to bring it into the light. Because of this, what we might learn from studying a dystopian novel is a new way of looking at the social customs that we readily accept and take for granted. Since a lot of what we do is second nature it may take exaggeration for readers to become aware of a present or potential social problem. The movies that I have seen referred to in the article are Brazil and A Scanner Darkly. What stands out in my memory of the movie Brazil was the exaggerated and overbearing presence of TV’s in every scene, which was satirizing and foreshadowing the reliance and inescapability of media and technology in our lives.

Week 10

Mar. 17th, 2012 03:34 pm
Part 1:

The myth of Persephone is that she was the goddess of springtime who, after being abducted by Hades, became the queen of the underworld. After being persuaded by Demeter, Hades agreed to allow Persephone to leave the underworld during the spring and summer of each year, and to live in the underworld with him for the remaining six months of the year. This myth relates to the mother-daughter relationship. The myth and both poems speak to the feelings of loss and protection of a daughter from a mother’s point of view.
In the first stanza of Rita Dove’s poem “Persephone, Falling”, Persephone is in a field, her attention drawn to picking the most beautiful flower when suddenly she is abducted, she had “strayed from the herd” meaning she had strayed from the safety of being by her mother’s side (8). The second stanza uses the myth as a warning to “go straight to school” and “stick with your playmates” or else you may have a fate not unlike Persephone (9, 11, 12). The poem is a warning and an example of how quickly something terrible can happen to a daughter, especially with the added fear that accompanies a mother’s perspective.
In Boland’s poem “The Pomegranate” initially she is Persephone in the underworld, “at first I was/ an exiled child in the crackling dusk of/ the underworld,” (10, 11, 12). And then she is the mother, Demeter, trying to bargain for her daughters rescue “When she came running I was ready /to make any bargain to keep her” (15, 16). These lines are to illustrate that she knows the experience of growing up and what to expect for her daughter, the continuity of the female experience is also seen in the line “The legend will be hers as well as mine” (50).
Boland and Dove both present their version of the myth of Persephone as a cautionary tale, focusing on Persephone as a daughter figure who needs protecting from the threats of the world.


Part 2:

The myth of Icarus is of a father and son who, in order to escape a labyrinth of their own making build wings from wax and feathers. The warnings of Icarus’ father, to not fly to close to the sun for fear of the wax melting thereby damaging the wings are not heeded, and Icarus plummets to his death in the sea below.
In the poem, “Musée des Beaux Arts” Auden is making a point about suffering and joy, the ordinary and extraordinary. He is speaking about how suffering is an inescapable part of life and is not separate but is the counterpart to joy. That even though a tragedy may be occurring life continues to go on, and it is only “The Old Masters” who have a true understanding of it (2).
He alludes to the myth of Icarus to illustrate how tragedy coeixts with the mundane tasks of daily life when he says “In Breughel's Icarus, for instance: how everything turns away/ Quite leisurely from the disaster;” (14, 15). He presents the image that ordinary and extraordinary events coexist, one not overpowering or even interrupting the other.
A popular saying is “don’t fly too close to the sun”, which may be said to someone who displays overconfidence with their ambitions. So in regard to “Icarus” being a popular myth used to describe the male experience, men may feel the need to break away from their father’s expectations or shadow, the lesson being that however one must separate themselves from their parents and make their own decisions, parental wisdom and advice should still be valued.

Week 8

Mar. 4th, 2012 10:26 am
Part 1:

Lorna Crozier uses packing for a long journey as an extended metaphor in her poem “Packing for the Future”. The word choices in the first stanza remind you of going on a literal journey: she uses words like walk, water, stones, high places, and earth, as a metaphor for the figurative journey of life. The title “Packing for the Future” is referring to gathering together what is important, and making the separation between what is worth carrying around and what can be left behind. These can be abstract such as “that small thing you cannot leave” or literal objects such as “the photograph that keeps you sane”. The line “[t]ake the thickest socks wherever you’re going you'll have to walk” implies that a self reliance will be necessary for the journey that you may have to walk alone, so be prepared by “[taking] the thickest socks” and stay grounded with “the way they hold you to the earth”. The sixth stanza that begins with “There may be doors nailed shut” is a metaphor for the challenges and rejection that accompany growing up, and “Take the dream you've been having since you were a child,” is the hope and innocence that if kept intact gives us the resiliency to keep going. And finally “Always travel lighter than the heart” means to not weigh ourselves down with the excess emotional baggage that will negatively weigh heavy on our mind and heart.
Richard Wilbur uses two extended metaphor’s for growing up in his poem “The Writer”: at first his daughter who is “the writer” is the metaphorical ships captain who is embarking on a new passage of life, and secondly she is the starling who must escape from that very room no matter how difficult. The tool for achieving this escape is through her writing. The author uses words like prow, gunwhale, and cargo to describe the ship that is her room, her life, and her writing when he says “In her room at the prow of the house”,“the stuff of her life is a great cargo”, and “from her shut door a commotion of typewriter-keys like a chain hauled over a gunwale”. The second metaphor is that of a starling “Which was trapped in that very room” just as his daughter is trapped until she grows up or gains freedom through her writing. As the starling “batter[s]” against the window while trying to escape, finally “clearing the sill of the world” this is the author’s hope for his daughter that she will not have to struggle as the starling did.
Both Crozier and Wilbur use extended metaphor to describe the nature of growing up, whether it compares to a long journey or a starling that is looking for freedom. The metaphors within the poems are an effective way to offer advice for how to approach life. Crozier speaks to a more general audience and to life’s journey in general, and Wilbur specifies his advice to his own daughter while being more specific to the process of growing up. The use of metaphor however generalizes both poems to some extent as the variation of images allow for creativity in the interpretation.


Part 2:
There are a few areas of overlap in Sylvia Plath’s biography and her poem titled “Daddy”. She says in her poem, “I was ten when they buried you” and she was in fact ten years old when her father died from complications with diabetes. She attempted suicide with the aid of sleeping pills when she was twenty years old as said in the next line, “At twenty I tried to die”. When she says, “I made a model of you, A man in black with a Meinkampf look…And I said I do, I do.” She may be referring to when she met Ted Hughes, who could have reminded her of her father and married him.
I do not believe that there is much accuracy in the details. Two very prominent issues that come with the accuracy of a biography, be it self written as poetry or an outside biography, are subjectivity and a selective memory. We interpret the world through our own lenses of our experience and can never be truly objective. Having access to the journals and poetry of Sylvia Plath can illuminate and back up pieces of the biographical information and vice versa. I do not think that she chose to write her life in this way for any purpose, I think that she was simply writing what was her internal experience. In my opinion an autobiography can be “art and lies”. It is not uncommon for people to recount the memory of a shared experience in entirely different ways. The art that is poetry and the lies that are our emotional experience is what I think Plath would consider her autobiography.

Blog #7

Feb. 25th, 2012 05:14 pm
Part 1
Horror, pity, and sympathy are responses that must be evoked if a character is to be considered a tragic hero. Pity can be felt for Antigone because she has had a life of misfortune and lost her brother who is not allowed a proper burial service; it is easy to be sympathetic to a character who has lost a family member. We feel horror for her that as a punishment for standing up for her beliefs she gets locked in a chamber. Alternatively she anticipates and accepts that death will be the consequence of her actions which makes her appear noble. The mistake which led her to slip over to the “dark side” was her following through on her conviction in trying to achieve justice for her brother. For these reasons Antigone meets the criteria that would establish her as tragic hero. Horror, pity, and sympathy are not felt for Creon until he loses his wife and son, but because his character does not evoke these emotions consistently, and he does not possess admirable or noble qualities he would not be considered a tragic hero.

Part 2
An extended metaphor is, “a metaphor introduced and then further developed throughout all or part of a literary work”. Extended metaphor was used in “The Boat” by Alistair Macleod when he anthropomorphizes cigarettes and relates it to death throughout the text. He begins with
“…only the grey corpses on the overflowing ashtray beside my bed bear witness to the extinction of the latest spark and silently await the crushing out the most recent of their fellows. And then because I am afraid to be alone with death…” (130) The cigarettes become a metaphor for death and the death of ones friends. When he says “The brown larvae of tobacco shreds…” (132) he alludes to death in that in roman mythology larvae were considered “A malevolent spirit of the dead”. The metaphor continues when Macleod refers to the “black scars and gashes” on the table caused by the cigarettes and the “snuffing out of their lives” (132).


http://www.thefreedictionary.com/larvae
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/extended+metaphor

Blog #6

Feb. 17th, 2012 07:58 pm
Part 1:

What has been a useful aspect of studying literature for me has been learning about binaries, how to identify them in a work of literature and how they add to the meaning that the author is trying to get across. It has been interesting to learn all of the different things to look for to enhance the meaning of the story such as patterns, binaries, symbols, and setting.

Part 2:
http://internetshakespeare.uvic.ca/Library/SLT/drama/classical%20drama/terms.html#anagnoris

1. Hamartia: The protagonist most often contributes to his or her own downfall by a mismatch betwen character and circumstances, or hamartia. Interestingly enough, the translation of hamartia as "flaw" may in fact itself be flawed. There is some evidence that suggests that it rather means any quality in excess--perhaps even a virtue--that brings about the fall of the protagonist.

Creon contributes to his downfall by acting on what he thinks is right by sending Antigone to the bridal chamber and preventing his son Haemon from marrying her, and then losing his son to suicide because of those actions as well as his wife’s suicide.

2. Hubris: Frequently an Oedipus, an Antigone, a Macbeth, a Lear, or a Cleopatra is brought to doom by excessive pride--hubris--a belief that he or she is somehow above the fates, or in control of destiny.

Antigone had excessive pride or hubris in that she actively went against Creon’s orders to satisfy her own moral beliefs that everyone should have a proper burial whether it was condoned or not.

3. Catharsis: Exactly what Aristotle meant by "purgation" or "catharsis" has been the subject of much discussion, but in essence he was concerned to explain the release of powerful, healing emotions that make tragedy so moving.

Creon experiences catharsis when he wails and prays over his son and his wife whom he lost to suicide due to his own actions.

4. Peripeteia: a sudden turn of events or an unexpected reversal

Creon sends Antigone away to suffer for disobeying him and burying her brother, and he ends up being the only one left to suffer alone.

5. Anagnorisis: Often the protagonists in tragedy undergo a process of recognition, in which they see their own nature, and destiny, more clearly than before.

After the seer visits Creon he recognizes that he is destined for tragedy unless he releases Antigone, and being prevented from doing so because she and his son are dead when he arrives forces him to repent and pray for what he has done.

Blog #4

Feb. 4th, 2012 10:14 am
Part 1

Part of the historical context of the story “Obason” is the internment of the Japanese during World War II. The historical context can complicate the point of view of the narrator in that her family’s history is also the history of many other Japanese Canadians. Her family was restricted in creating their own story because of the forced relocation and confinement that they suffered.

The historical context can also help us in understanding why the family dynamics are the way they are. Obason’s silence had a repelling effect on her daughters, they can’t reach her, and so for them “departure is as necessary as breath” (Kogawa 5). They have been shut out by her silence which is illustrated by the narrator in saying “Her daughters, unable to rescue her or bear the silent rebuke of her suffering have long since fled” (Kogawa 5) which shows that the daughters have been changed indirectly by how their mother changed and coped with the memories of internment. Houses and belongings were confiscated at the time of internment which would justify Obason’s attachment to her house, her many belongings, and reason for why the house “is now her blood and bones”.

For the Uncle it “was the sea who was his constant landlord” (Kogawa 3), and at the time of internment fishing boats were seized or impounded which would have made him feel alienated and cut-off from his family history. Before internment Uncle stands before his boat “eager to pass on the message that all is well” (Kogawa 4) then the boats are seized and “the memories are drowned in a whirlpool of protective silence” (Kogawa 5). An emotional consequence of the event of the internment was a silencing of spirit and voice within the family.


Part 2

Useful tips that have helped me write essays in the past have been to have a template, have a friend read the essay, and to give myself enough time to write the essay. I use past essays that I have done well on as a template for sentence structure and organization of ideas. I always have a friend read my essay which is often useful in catching run-on sentences and level of clarity. I try to start my essays as soon as possible so that I can take my time. You may find that you need more resources than you thought or that you have to change your thesis, so you want to have enough time to make changes if necessary.

One new writing strategy that I would like to implement is to use multiple resources such as websites, writing guides and the writing center at Camosun.

Blog #3

Jan. 28th, 2012 05:04 pm
Part 1

The allusions that were used in “The Boat” were: Thomas Hardy’s Eustacia Vye who was emulated by the narrator’s mother; the life and hardship of a fisherman and reference to the uncle as “a latter day Tashtego” as seen in Moby Dick; and David Copperfield’s Ham Peggoty, who has a love of the sea and is the son and nephew of fishermen.

What these three intertexualities have in common is their connection to fisherman, a life on the sea, and tragedy that comes in the form of drowning

The allusions do not idealize the life of a fisherman but connect it to a life that ends in tragedy; the narrator included these references in his reflections to foreshadow the details of his father’s death. The narrator who is now an adult man and “…teaches at a great Midwestern university” is likely to have read the literature that his father was so fond of, and in retrospect is able draw the connections and parallels between the two. Also, if his father was not on the boat he was on his bed reading, or discussing books with his children so it is fitting that the memory of his life be entwined with the stories.


Part 2

6. Key passage: “I say this now with a sense of wonder at my own stupidity in thinking I was somehow free…”
Why does his father get better “rather miraculously”?

The narrator had thought that he “was somehow free” from having to become a fisherman and could continue “playing and helping in the boat” even as his parents got older, and continue “doing well in school”. The point at which he realizes that he was not free to continue doing these things is when he realizes that “there were but three of us in the house” which meant that he as the only son would eventually have to begin to work in the fishing boat as his father got older, and he could not as easily do as his sisters did and leave his parents behind forever.

His father gets sick and “…seemed to grow old and ill at once” which meant that all of the preparation work was left to the narrator, his mother and her brother. Because it is getting closer to the start of the season and his father is still sick when they begin to fall behind in their work it is at this time he realizes that his studies and the books he loves will have to come second in life if there is room for them at all, and he spends his first entire day at home to work.

His father asked his son to go back to school which he first defies but then agrees to. If he were to not get better “rather miraculously” in time for the start of the season his son would have no chance of staying in school but would have been forced to work on the boat before the school year was over. Which his father predictably would try to delay in order give his son the chance to study since that was his wish for his younger self. And so he finds the will to get up and back to work when it is time.

Blog #2

Jan. 23rd, 2012 10:24 am
Part 1
In the story "Boys and Girls”, the narrator feels certain ways about particular areas of the house. Her mother’s work is in the kitchen which the narrator describes as “hot and dark” and is a place that she runs away from when her mother is not looking. She views her mother, her mother’s work, and the kitchen itself as tired, dreary and depressing. This is contrasted with how she feels about her father’s “ritualistically important” work which is done outdoors, or in the “warm, safe, brightly lit downstairs world” of the cellar. The children sleep upstairs, where they describe the air as cold and stale, and are afraid of the dark only inside of their bedroom but not the dark outside. The children make up rules to keep them safe when they’re in the bedroom and the narrator describes the beds as “narrow life rafts”, which indicates that she does not feel comforted by her room. These descriptions illustrate binaries with inside and outside, and the cold and dark upstairs and warmth and light downstairs.


Part 2
In “The Boat” Jenny is described as “tall, dark and powerfully energetic”. In Thomas Hardy’s “The Return of the Native” Eustacia Vye has a wildness to her, is passionate and proud, and both women are written of as beautiful. Eustacia makes a sensible decision to marry a man whom she feels can provide her with stability but is met with tragedy and accusations that lead her to drown herself, the narrator suspects that Jenny married because of a pregnancy and she eventually ends up alone and unhappy. Both of these characters married for practical reasons rather than for love.
Moby Dick is about Captain Ahab’s revenge upon the great whale that took his leg. Ishmael works on this whaling ship, that meets its demise when Moby Dick is harpooned and pulls everyone to the bottom of the sea as he plummets, with the exception of Ishmael who survives.
The good natured Ham Peggoty lives with his Uncle, Fiancé, and Em’ly, as his father drowned when he was young. Ham drowns just as his father did while trying to rescue Steerforth.

Blog #1

Jan. 15th, 2012 10:07 pm
Part 1:
In the first line of this poem, “They fuck you up, your mum and dad”, Larkin is addressing the universal you, implying that every parent fucks up their children. This line likely provokes some sort of emotional response with everyone whether they believe the merit of the statement or not, since we all have parents and have been affected by how they raised, or didn’t, raise us. The emotional response combined with the immediacy of the universal aspect in the poem shows that it contains at least a few aspects of great literature.
The reader is not sure whether it is meant to be taken seriously or not; with his nursery rhyme style of rhythm and use of simple language, it’s as though he is making fun of the topic. Then the last stanza becomes serious and reads like a pessimistic warning, that the only way to not fuck up our children is to not have any. Concurrently it is this contrast between seriousness and levity in the poem that makes it intriguing. However, Larkin does not go very deep in to the intense theme of man perpetuating a cycle of misery beyond a face value idea that we can all simply blame our parents. Also, intimating that everyone is fucked up is a very strong and incisive statement and leads me to feel that the message in his poem reads more like a limited opinion than a universal truth. I would not classify this particular poem as “great literature” if only by how straightforward it is; there are not too many ways in which it can be interpreted, but can only vary slightly according to who the reader is.


Part 2:
In “Evaline”, even after the mother has passed away Evaline’s decisions are still heavily weighted by a promise she made to her mother to keep the home together, conflicting with the desire to escape the pitiful vision of what her mother’s life had been. This deepens the theme of Larkin’s poem in that it shows the inescapable effect of passing down baggage onto our children however unintended.
In the end it seems that she is not able to break free from the conditioning of her parents in order to seek a life that is truly her own. By giving up her own dreams to fulfill the promise to her mother Eveline may feel it her future child’s duty to do the same, and perhaps her only chance at avoiding that fate would be to heed the warning in Larkin’s poem and not have any kids herself.

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